Cleaned up. Going to add tone and mix in some foley- might even animate.
Got some feedback that some things were confusing, but- fiddle sticks. Hopefully with some tone and some keyframed animation it'll start reading right. It's funny when you do lots of board revisions like this and show your "final"- some people will like parts of your old one, be ok with your new one and suggest new things all together. Ughaarahgahagh
Wish there was more time for stoREboarding, but...as a very great visual storytelling teacher told us in class:
"We work inside a box- we do our very best work in the box".
word.
