June 13, 2011

Noir Thing 2

Score! Cleaning the room and found these guys from fall semester. Really nice actually to look at these again after a whole semester and see some of the problems with how some of these shots break to other things that haven't really been established, some lost opportunities with match-on actions, and fundamental drawing/perspective problems. I actually edited a couple of things after critique, so don't really know what's completely wrong with it. Hope it reads!

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