Ha, man...
Bear is being brought into cells
Warden drops him in
MCU to bear on ground
Cuts out to warden leaving
Bear moves to corner
MCU to bear in corner sad
Bear looks up
Moves screen left
Cuts out to bear ending at bars
Bear looks out at nurse
Figures the lock is how you get out
Cuts back out, nurse in bear cell
Cuts to Bear on Couch
CU to bear looking
Eye-line action to key
Cuts out to nurse giving bear something
Cuts back to keys, bear takes keys
Nurse is like omg, bear walks off
cuts out to bear running off
ends at door
Cuts to nurse pressing a button (how do we know? we don't, bad storyboarding right here)
Cut back to bear opening door (no establishing shot so we dunno, wth is happening; moar bad storyboarding)
Bear running from stick figures (they're really guards and this is supposed to be climax which all takes place in just one short shot; bad)
The thing ends with the bear grabbing a water fountain by a window and throwing it out the window like Cuckoo's Nest; I threw it out though because when I pitched it I realized how dumb the whole thing was. The beginning (also thrown out) was even worse because it had nothing to do with what the rest of the story was about.
Blarg
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