Been meaning to post this for a while now. Had to revisit this for class, I worked on it a bit more after and really tried to flesh out the 1st act.
[edit] Pitched:
Establishing shot of a market alley with oranges
Dude sneaking behind what seems to be an orange selling shop
Dude looks right suspiciously
Creeps up
Hugs the wall in anticipation
Peeks over
No one there
Looks back
Looks around wall
Looks into shop and there's the keeper
Cut closer to keeper
There's a gun!
Ah!!!
Glavin!
Sad
Oranges...
Mmmph
Gonna do this
Walks in front of shop nonchalantly
Whistling by
Looks over newspaper suspiciously
Whistles more
Hmmm...
ECU to mouth whistling
Eh...
Fooled him
*angel chorus*
Oranges!
oranges...camera starts to pan here
Camera ends pan, keeper in silhouette
Cut to keeper grabbing soda
Match-on action to soda grab
dude grabbing organge
closer to soda
closer to orange
grabbed soda
grabbed orange
Mmmmm, soda
Heh, soda
Wait, what's that back there?
What the-
spit
Hold up!
Fuck yeah, jacked them oranges
Crane shot match on action running out of shop
Blocked by someone forward center
goes left
blocked left!
goes right
blocked right
goes back center
blocked center
Cut close
Reaches for knife
match on action to grabbing knife, something in back
rack focus to keeper
whip pan left
whip pan ending
focus on kid, low angle shot
cut back to dude with knife grabbed
cut to keeper
low angle cut to dude, doesn't want to do this
lets go
too late, dude has gun
shoots
tracking bullet through
tracking bullet, starts going towards barber shop
tracking bullet inside the shop
bullet crashes in mirrorr
barber goes popeye
cut CU to dude, keeper approaching with gun
Dude looks down, keeper still approaching
Eye line match to kid
Camera drops, oranges are falling by dude's feet
camera starts tracking one orange, dude's foot moving
orange approaching other set of feet
hits foot
orange is grabbed
it's the keeper! can tell by the suspenders
confirmed, keeper looks down at orange
looks up from orange
cu to keeper's expression
Dude has kid hostage, stop!
END SCENE
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