Orange Cut - Story Boards

With beat boards behind and some critiques in mind, it's storyboard time. 

Fleshed some of the characters a bit more, and supposedly, the shots should read for themselves. They really don't, so that means I failed at the job, won't narrate each board though. We were supposed to choose a scene from our beats and storyboard that, I chose the very beginning since I wanted to focus a bit more on the shop keeper and thief dynamic.

After critique though, I realized what another bad job I did at trying to convey the idea I was trying to put through. Main problem was actually establishing that relationship between the orange keeper and the thief. In my defense though, we just got through the montage editing style by the Soviets in Film History, so...I blame Eisenstein.

Seriously though, next assignment will be to do it again, but...better. I have a couple of ideas. Storyboards at the bottom.

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